Jayne, My compliments on your dress sense and little black poem. All the best for the comp!
But, re your more recent ditty...
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Originally Posted by Jayne Osborn
Thanks Brian.
Now, can I carry on with the chain reaction thing, I ask?
Keeping to a proper rhyme scheme was hard with my entry,
yet it was a kind of 'chain reaction' story, I consoled myself.
For once, I sent it in time, though I'm not hopeful of success at all.
Lucy has lots of other good 'uns to choose from.
Mind you, it's better than nothing -- mayB,
but maybe not. OK, so I cheated...
...do I care?  |
Jayne, O Jayne,
Exemplar stoic!
‘Cheated’?
Dreaded word echoic!
Can it be?
Eye, shall it see,
Enmired in textspeak ploy,
Your poem?
May I not implore you,
Undo
Obloquy
You’d bring upon you-
Urgently renounce your crime,
Edit that verse one more time:
End Line Seven... Eight, begin it...
Truly this time? Do, this minute!
