Dean: Also my "best guess" was a sestina variant, but it seemed too great a leap. I'll certainly go check out that site you mentioned. (What a coincidence!) And I do have (and warmly recommend) "The Art of Syntax" so I'll look there as well.
Susan: I wasn't smart enough to think of hendecasyllabics (which I'm not sure I understand completely, despite knowing several lovely poems which are so categorized. Notably Annie Finch's "Lucid Waking".)
I was/am also perplexed about the identity rhymes because they are not used consistently.
And use of "anthroopmorphize" and possibly even "stereopticons" would in these spherical halls doubtless call forth at least a few resounding cries of "off with his head".
**
Let me say at once that I am a huge fan of Donald Justice. But I was also surprised at the two "O" in this poem. I am probably exposing my ignorance (not the first time) but I am looking for the reasons this is included in the Best of the Best, which is no mean feat considering the number of poems that fell by the wayside before a Best of the Best could be compiled.
Last edited by Janice D. Soderling; 02-21-2014 at 01:45 PM.
Reason: spelling
|