Thread: Anxiety is a frog
View Single Post
  #7  
Unread 05-23-2025, 12:24 PM
Harry Nicolas Harry Nicolas is offline
New Member
  
Join Date: Mar 2025
Location: USA
Posts: 47
Default
Hey James, I appreciate the feedback. That does seem like the consensus, the rhyming is forced and there is just too much going on. I will look into that for the next draft.

Thanks,
Harry
Reply With Quote