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Unread 05-23-2025, 12:24 PM
Harry Nicolas Harry Nicolas is offline
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Hey James, I appreciate the feedback. That does seem like the consensus, the rhyming is forced and there is just too much going on. I will look into that for the next draft.

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Harry
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