Kevin-
I agree with you.
I've changed my mind about autumnal equinox. Too cold a phrase, just a point on the calendar. Autumn leaves, because of the image, and regardless that the short syllables in autumnal equinox almost parallel Japanese, is better I think.
the autumn leaves
this equinox is freezing!
are yellow edged
[This message has been edited by albert geiser (edited April 12, 2005).]
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