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Unread 02-06-2019, 04:25 PM
John Isbell John Isbell is offline
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Hi Susan,

Your usual high standard. I do have a couple of possible nits: in the (untranslatable) opening, mir is gone and the object of anfasstet has shifted (not that I'm sure anything can be done here); and draenge for me is not beg.

Cheers,
John
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