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Old 09-21-2018, 12:34 PM
Mark McDonnell Mark McDonnell is offline
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Hi Sam,

I think this is a strong and unusual poem. I love the fly at the end, with its echoes of Blake and King Lear. But the last line made me think of Yoda from Star Wars. We have Tontoism as a poetry crime. Yodaism?
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