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Unread 03-03-2021, 04:56 PM
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Sarah,

I've replaced "alongside the caption" with "emblazoned with the words", which is hopefully clearer.

There might be a more technical/interesting way of saying that -- maybe the text could be flashing for example, of have drop-shadow, and maybe "emblazoned" is too old-fashioned ...

Matt
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