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Unread 05-03-2022, 04:23 PM
W T Clark W T Clark is offline
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Your second line is confusing. An onlooker would be so effected by the narrator's state that they themselves would be in mourning? Surely this is not true, it seems unbelievable. So, anyone who observes the narrator would have to gaze at the narrator's face so long that they would pass through the narrator's mourning. Either way the line seems awkwardly phrased.
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