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Unread 02-17-2020, 10:03 AM
Mark McDonnell Mark McDonnell is offline
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Yes, Julie probably reduces it to all it needs there. The thing as it stands, even cut down as I did, is just an exercise in proficient meter and rhyme. There isn't anything surprising or amusing enough in the content or language to justify the length.
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