[John Whitworth]

Competition: Oh! What a horrible morning!
Lucy Vickery
04 August 201206:00

In Competition No. 2757 you were invited to introduce a note of unwelcome reality into a song from a musical.
Thanks to Brian Allgar for suggesting this corker of a competition, which attracted a large entry. You might have taken as your model ‘Pore Jud is Daid’ fromOklahoma!, which, as Josephine Boyle points out, is not without gritty realism: ‘He looks like he’s asleep, It’s a shame that he won’t keep. But it’s summer and we’re running out of ice.’
Frank Upton, W.J. Webster, Paul Evans and Alexander Faris just missed out on joining the winners, printed below, who are rewarded with £25 each. Alan Millard pockets the bonus fiver.

Let’s skip to the terrible ending,
A very sad place I know,
When you chance to advance then it’s back you go,
When you trip you will slip with a ti-la-so

Ti-la-so, ti-la-so,
The backward slide is a contra-flow,
Ti-la-so, ti-la-so,
Ti-la-so-fa-me-re-do! It goes like so:

Chorus: Tee, the game I lost at golf,
La, la dolce vita gone,
Sow, the seeds I scattered once,
Farr, the girl who led me on,
Me, the fool who fell for Farr,
Dough, the sticky mess I’m in
As I sink back down to ti (she-me-he)
Alan Millard

My royal palace has no indoor plumbing.
My bedroom stinks of last night’s chamber pot.
There’s always damp and chilly weather comingT
To Camelot.

My people don’t expect to live past thirty.
A few can read and write, but most cannot.
We seldom bathe; we’re mostly sick and dirty
In Camelot.

Our food’s unwholesome and unappetising.
Our grain is rife with insects, rats and rot.
Good wine or worm-free meat would be surprising
For Camelot.

To me there’s simply not
A more depressing thought
Than those I entertain about
Our lives in Camelot.
Chris O’Carroll

I have often walked down this street before,
But I’ve never seen raw sewage round my feet before,
This incessant rain has blocked every drain,
Such is life on the street where I live.

We’ve more pushers here than the heart of town,
And more pitbulls than in any other part of town,
Pavement cyclists race at psychotic pace,
Terrorising the street where I live.

And oh, the cowering feeling,
When you know no policeman is near,
A bleak, disempowering feeling,
That any second a street mugger may appear.

People snarl and swear, and they bother me,
There are very many places I would rather be,
But in this sheer hell you could never sell
Any house on the street where I live.
Roger Theobald

I am sixteen going on seventeen,
Future aflood with fears,
Going to uni strikes me as loony
Saddled with debt for years.

There’s no point in swottin’ and learnin’
College I will avoid,
Who values history if money’s a mystery
When you are unemployed.

Careers advisers, older and wiser,
Help me with my CV,
Point out the goodies waiting for hoodies
Who have a brain like me.

But I’m a loser, an internet user
Soon as I’m out of school.
So I’m resigned to being consigned to
Desolate days on the dole.
Max Ross

Chat shows on telly and pop songs that sicken
Red-top reporting and KFC chicken
Jeremy Clarkson and all of his mates
These are a few of my favourite hates.

Charity muggers and wet summer weather
Dog turds on pavements and beefsteaks like leather
PCs that crash and a clergy that prates
These are a few of my favourite hates

Motorway gridlock and cold-calling assholes
Rats in the cellar and similar hassles
Toe-curling times when my ego deflates
These are a few of my favourite hates

When the banks fail, when the news grates,
When life’s a damp squib,
I add to my roster of favourite hates
And then I complain ad lib
G.M. Davis

There’s no business like show business
if naïve’s what you are.
One walk-on part in Hull and transatlantic
dreams of fame now beckon from afar.
But don’t be fooled by flattery. It’s frantic
how sycophantic all actors are.

There’s no people like show people
who think they’re in the know.
Yesterday they said that you would be a star.
Tonight you opened. How wrong they are!
Now there’s nothing for it but to hit the bar
and then find a new show.
Don’t ask me how I know.
Martin Parker

[Brian Allgar]

Congratulations to the winners!

But as for me - well, stap me vitals! Me own competition, and I don't get a bloomin' look-in! A miss, a very palpable miss ...

[Jayne Osborn]

It was indeed a 'corker' of a competition. Congratulations to Chris and Martin. Well done, chaps!

Brian,
You mean you're not Alan Millard?
(I think you possibly missed out because Lucy was erring on the side of ethical caution.)

Jayne

[Martin Parker]

Since I gather that I have also scored in today's Lit. Rev. comp. I am beginning to suspect that my name may be yet another of Brian Allgar's noms de plume.

But, so long as the cheques keep being sent to me, I can live with it.

[Max Goodman]

Congrats to the winners. Good stuff!

[Brian Allgar]

Martin, I don't think you can be one of my noms de plume. They always hand the cash over.

[Jayne Osborn]

I can't keep up with all these noms de plume, as you'll see on the LitRev results thread.

Brian and Bazza, you're too many blokes at once!

Jayne

[Brian Allgar]

Alas, Jayne, my noms de plume these days are a bunch of featherweights who don't earn their keep.

[FOsen]

Encore!!!!

[Gail White]

These are great. I do think Chris should have been the prizewinner.