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11-06-2014, 01:25 PM
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Cantor in NVN
Last edited by Esther Murer; 11-06-2014 at 01:25 PM.
Reason: forgot link
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11-06-2014, 01:33 PM
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Entertaining, Michael. I remember the first part of it. The last line feels a bit awkward metrically, but I like the content of the whole as satire.
Susan
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11-06-2014, 01:38 PM
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Droll. Kudos!
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11-06-2014, 02:21 PM
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Enjoyed this, Michael.
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11-06-2014, 02:59 PM
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Congratulations, Michael! I bet your line of sleeveless T-shirts, previously advertised at Frostwriting, is going to sell like hotcakes (or beefcakes?) with this kind of product placement.
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11-06-2014, 03:11 PM
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Wow, razor sharp wit! Congrats, Michael!
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11-06-2014, 03:45 PM
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Yea, Michael! Nice photo of you, too . . .
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11-06-2014, 04:58 PM
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Very good, Michael. I enjoyed that droll double sonnet. Congrats!
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11-06-2014, 07:04 PM
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I workshopped an earlier version of this some months back. Thanks, all, for the help.
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11-06-2014, 10:58 PM
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I remember this, Michael, and I really like the way it's turned out. Congrats!
Charlotte
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