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Unread 10-21-2024, 12:06 PM
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Default Gehenna Is Empty--Eclectica
My poem "Gehenna is Empty," which was workshopped at the Sphere, is up at Eclectica.

https://www.eclectica.org/v28n4/riley.html
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Great poem, John. A sung sentence.

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Unread 10-22-2024, 06:34 PM
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Congrats, John!

I must have missed this one when you workshopped it. I'm happy I got to read it now. I really like it. I particularly love, "sit / sewn to windows by threaded glances".

Matt
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Thanks, Jim and Matt. It was here last year or so. I’m pleased you had a chance to read it, Matt.
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