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Unread 07-06-2001, 07:57 AM
graywyvern graywyvern is offline
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Knowing I Live in a Dark Age

Knowing I live in a dark age before history,
I watch my wallet and
am less struck by gunfights in the avenues
than by the newsie with his dirty pink chapped face
calling a shabby poet back for his change.

The crows mobbing the blinking, sun-stupid owl;
wolves eating a hamstrung calf hind end first
keeping their meat alive and fresh...these
are marks of foresight, beginnings of wit;
but Jesus wearing thorns and sunstroke
beating his life and death into words
to break the rods and blunt the axes of Rome:
this and like things followed.

Knowing that in this advertising rainbow
I live like a trapeze artist with a headache,
my poems are no aspirins...they show
pale bayonets of grass waving thin on dunes;
the paralytic and his lyric secrets;
my friend Al, union builder and cynic,
hesitating to believe his own delicate poems
lest he believe in something better than himself:
and history, which is yet to begin,
will exceed this, exalt this
as a poem erases and rewrites its poet.

(1969)

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Unread 07-06-2001, 12:31 PM
Solan Solan is offline
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Though I do not like political fiction or poetry, I nevertheless recognize this as a good poem. Many interesting images to ponder.

A man of simple joy, though, it will be one line I remember a year from now: "a poem erases and rewrites its poet." So simple it will be a cliche if repeated, but a nice wink of the eye.
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