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08-18-2021, 08:44 AM
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The New Verse News
My recent poem, workshopped here:
http://www.newversenews.com/
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08-18-2021, 01:19 PM
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Excellent poem; congratulations, Susan!
Best wishes,
Fliss
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08-18-2021, 08:52 PM
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An effective slant on fat discrimination, but I'm still wondering about the 8 fat women, why the number's so specific. Wouldn't "some" do it?
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08-18-2021, 09:03 PM
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Ralph, I think "eight" was just the speaker's way of implying "not many." It is weirdly specific, but I think that makes it more memorable as a quote.
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08-18-2021, 10:16 PM
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I appreciate the wry, chiding tone, Susan. 
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08-19-2021, 10:03 PM
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Susan, I remember this poem from the workshop. I enjoyed it then and enjoyed it again even more. I agree that having a specific number of women makes the line more distinctive.
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