[Jayne Osborn]

OK, here’s the latest competition. Tessa says:

Recently someone rang me up in London to ask me why I wasn’t at the station in Devon. A poem, please, not necessarily on that particular example, called ‘Missed Appointment’. Maximum 16 lines.

Entries to ‘Competition 143’ by post (The Oldie, 65 Newman Street, London W1T 3EG), fax (020 7436 8804)
or email (comps@theoldie.co.uk) by 21st October. Don’t forget to include your postal address.

[Martin Parker]

I got on the wrong train in Bradford
and missed my connection at Crewe,
which is why I'm now stuck here in Scunthorpe
instead of in Paris with you.

More may follow, though it seems sacriligious to risk a parody of one of my favourite James Fenton poems.

[John Whitworth]

I suppose it's inevitable that my mind should run on such things.

Missed Appointment

The doorbell rang. I caught my breath.
I drew the bolt and it was Death.
He fumbled in his cloak and took
From some recess a little book.
His glasses slid along his nose.
‘It's Mr Whitworth, I suppose.’
The voice was colder than the stones.
It froze the marrow of my bones.
But I replied in breezy tones,
‘No Whitworth here. My name is Jones.
Whitworth resides at forty-seven,
An ancient shag, and ripe for Heaven,
His mind long gone, his body bent.’
Death nodded, tipped his hat and went.
Jones passed away that very night.
I sent a wreath, as well I might.

As you were. What follows is now the definitive version.


Missed Appointment

The doorbell rang. I caught my breath.
I drew the bolt and it was Death.
He fumbled in his cloak and took
From some recess a little book.
He put his glasses on his nose.
‘It’s Mr Whitworth, I suppose.’
A frosty smile played on his lips
That chilled me to my fingertips,
So I replied in breezy tones,
‘No Whitworth here. My name is Jones.'
Whitworth resides at forty-seven,
An ancient shag, and ripe for Heaven,
His mind long gone, his body bent.’
Death nodded, tipped his hat and went.
Jones passed away that very night.
I sent a wreath, as well I might.

[Jayne Osborn]

John, that's excellent; a really funny take on the subject

[basil ransome-davies]

Funny-macabre, right up my street, though I do balk at 'I/eye' as end-rhymes.

[John Whitworth]

Point taken, bazza. I'll have a thunk. Thunk over. The result is posted.