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06-20-2016, 01:46 PM
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No letters missing in this poem. Nice work, Ed.
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06-20-2016, 01:49 PM
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Delightful, Ed!
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06-20-2016, 01:55 PM
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A great poem.
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06-20-2016, 02:09 PM
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Very clever, Ed.
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06-20-2016, 04:05 PM
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Ed, you have that rare thing: originality.
Kudos for sure!
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06-20-2016, 05:01 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Don Jones
Ed, you have that rare thing: originality.
Kudos for sure!
Don
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Yeah. Another good one.
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06-21-2016, 10:38 AM
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Well done, Ed, and I know this sort of poem needs more than mere wordplay, which you have provided. Though I too wonder about the last line. Meaning perhaps "g.d."...
Cheers and congrats!
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06-21-2016, 12:30 PM
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Well, if the word God is missing the letter O, then we're left without a God, merely a G and a d, which could be taken as a metaphysical or theological observation: There is no god, just death; no happy hereafter, merely finality in the grave, so one may as well toast death instead of an imagined paradise to come. I suppose that's one way to read that last line.
Also, the O reverberates as an exclamation for me, as in O! or Oh! And that could suggest a variety of expressions: surprise, resignation, delight, or disbelief.
Richard
Last edited by Richard Meyer; 06-21-2016 at 12:54 PM.
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06-21-2016, 12:44 PM
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Doesn't it simply mean that the word "God" is, perhaps, already missing an O? Try putting it back in and see what happens.
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06-21-2016, 12:49 PM
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Good question. Richard and Julie make valid points. "Gd" could also mean "God damn" - as in, "drink up for we are damned."
Added in: It would, on the other hand, be a mistake to assume that the poem means an English analog to the Tetragrammaton. Ed is going in the opposite direction of no God or God that damns.
Last edited by Don Jones; 06-21-2016 at 01:02 PM.
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