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Unread 06-08-2010, 01:03 PM
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I've always liked Plath's "You're."
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Unread 06-09-2010, 02:32 AM
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Beautiful baby contests in magazines often have snaps of children up to about four - proper little Shirley Temples some of them - which I find weird. Anyway this is a poem about an older child at nursery school.


BOTTLED SCHOONER

They pull the masts up with a string,
so simple when you know a thing,
but I was last in Mrs Watkin’s class
to see the ship had not sailed through the glass.

So simple when you know a thing,
enchantment melts like snow in spring;
I see the schooner as it has to be:
a wooden model on a velvet sea.
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Unread 06-10-2010, 12:04 AM
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I wrote about a dozen of these, most of them in the middle of the night while wheeling her pram through the nearby streets to keep her asleep. She didn't do a lot of that as I remember, except when she was dumped at the University creche when she snoozed all bloody day at our expense.
It is also proof positive that I was still smoking in those days. Hardly surprising.


The Things

Some of the things our daughter’s got:
She’s got a ball. You throw the ball.
She throws it back. Or sometimes not.
Most babies scarcely throw at all.

She’s got an orange knitted cat
Which is, perhaps, a kangaroo.
Opinions differ as to that.
One must suppose the knitter knew.

A matchbox, an engraved brass bell,
A dish, a spoon, a plastic cup,
A tower she can knock to hell
(I’d like to see her build it up).

A woolly bobble and a puck-
ered tube that held a fat cigar,
A big duck and a little duck,
Three rattles and a Hong Kong car.

What life in lists inheres – the names
Of wild flowers, railway stations, Kings
And Queens of England, children’s games,
Dead poets. And our daughter’s things.
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Unread 06-10-2010, 04:26 PM
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That's lovely, John.

Here's one of mine:

On a Photograph of a Young Child

Shining eyes and golden hair,
little soldier standing there—
may the future take you where
stars will always shine at night,
days will all be golden-bright.
May the touch of care be light.
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Default Baby Poems

Can't remember who wrote it--possibly A. Bierce, but I have been unable to forget one stanza of this one from way back:


Last night our baby died--
It died comitting suicide.
'Twas a nasty baby anyhow
And cost us forty dollars.


Anybody recall who wrote it? Is there more?


W.
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Beautiful, David. It sounds like something Latin, which is good in my book. Martial's verse (or verses) on the death of Erotion spring to mind.
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I published this in Light a few years ago:

Parenthood

I love my kids, don't get me wrong,
but wonder, when they fuss and fight,
if species who consume their young
might have it right.
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Unread 06-11-2010, 06:31 PM
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I wrote this for my grand-babies, I wanted them to have a lullaby without any mention of harm or dark or bad dreams. No 'tomorrow, if God grants it, you will wake up again' and no falling off breaking branches.

LULLABY

Now little children everywhere
Must go to bed like you dear
On farms, in village and in town
Little children snuggle down
All tucked in and kissed good night
As the evening loses light
In the morning you can play
You will have a whole new day

Sleepy time is nearly here
Off to bed my little dear
Little birds are sleeping too
Tired out and snug like you
Sleep and dream my little dear
Mom and dad will be right here
In the morning you can play
You will have a whole new day

(the repetition is not neglect, it is to make sleepy and reassure.)

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Unread 06-12-2010, 04:25 PM
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A favorite of my mine:

Dahn the Plug'ole


A muvver was barfin’ ‘er biby one night,
The youngest of ten and a tiny young mite,
The muvver was pore and the biby was thin,
Only a skelington covered in skin;
The muvver turned rahnd for the soap off the rack,
She was but a moment, but when she turned back,
The biby was gorn; and in anguish she cried,
’Oh, where is my biby?’ - The Angels replied:
’Your biby ‘as fell dahn the plug’ole,
Your biby ‘as gorn dahn the plug;
The poor little thing was so skinny and thin,
'E oughter been barfed in a jug;
Your biby is perfectly ‘appy,
'E won’t need a barf any more,
Your biby ‘as fell dahn the plug’ole,
Not lost, but gorn before!’
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Unread 06-12-2010, 07:45 PM
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Petra,

Where ever is that from?
It is priceless. We had a family dinner tonight, and one of the seven year old grandsons read it out loud to great effect. It is marvelous...... poor little skellington biby.
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