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Unread 03-10-2025, 02:27 PM
Julie Steiner Julie Steiner is offline
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Default Degas and Me in The Ekphrastic Review

Hi, all! I workshopped a translation of this sonnet here about ten years ago, and got a lot of helpful feedback (despite not quite being able to get the translation to work to my satisfaction at the time), so thanks:

Sonnet IV by Edgar Degas

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That's great, Julie. Very nicely translated - so far as I can tell from my ancient A-Level French, anyway.

So Degas was a poet as well as a painter? I had no idea.

Congratulatory cheers

David
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Hi, Julie

Lovely translation. I, too, did not know that Degas wrote poetry. Nice plug for the Eratosphere in the author’s bio.

Glenn
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Great sonnet, Julie, and I adore the last line. Congratulations on the translation and thanks for sharing this.

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