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03-23-2006, 02:01 PM
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It seems appropriate to help inaugurate Marilyn Taylor's moderation of Mastery with a few of her own poems, to give our members a sense of her own mastery and range.
I hope you don't mind, Marilyn, if I post some of my favorite poems from Subject to Change?:
Summer Sapphics
Maybe things are better than we imagine
if a rubber inner-tube still can send us
drifting down a sinuous, tree-draped river
like the Wisconsin—
far removed from spores of touristococcus.
As we bob half-in and half-out of water
with our legs like tentacles, dangling limply
under the surface
we are like invertebrate creatures, floating
on a cosmic droplet—a caravan of
giant-sized amoebas, without a clear-cut
sense of direction.
It’s as if we’ve started evolving backwards:
mammal, reptile, polliwog, protozoon—
toward that dark primordial soup we seem so
eager to get to.
Funny, how warm water will whisper secrets
in its native language to every cell—yet
we, the aggregation, have just begun to
fathom the gestures.
The Blue Water Buffalo
One in 250 Cambodians, or 40,000 people, have lost a limb to a landmine.
--U.N. Development Programme Communications Office
On both sides of the screaming highway, the world
is made of emerald silk—sumptuous bolts of it,
stitched by threads of water into cushions
that shimmer and float on the Mekong’s munificent glut.
In between them plods the ancient buffalo—dark blue
in the steamy distance, and legless
where the surface of the ditch dissects
the body from its waterlogged supports below
or it might be a woman, up to her thighs
in the lukewarm ooze, bending at the waist
with the plain grace of habit, delving for weeds
in water that receives her wrist and forearm
as she feels for the alien stalk, the foreign blade
beneath the greenest of green coverlets
where brittle pods in their corroding skins
now shift, waiting to salt the fields with horror.
The Geniuses Among Us
They take us by surprise, these tall perennials
that jut like hollyhocks above the canopy
of all the rest of us—bright testimonials
to the scale of human possibility.
They come to bloom for every generation,
blazing with extraordinary notions
from the taproots of imagination—
dazzling us with incandescent visions.
And soon, the things we never thought would happen
start to happen: the solid fences
of reality begin to soften,
crumbling into fables and romances—
and we turn away from where we’ve been
to a new place, where light is pouring in.
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03-23-2006, 03:19 PM
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Wow--these are amazing. This is my first exposure to Marilyn's work, and I'm feeling very, very lucky.
--CS
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03-23-2006, 11:42 PM
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Alicia, thank you so much for posting these poems-- and Clay, I appreciate your positive reaction to them. I think I'm really starting to like it here. . .
Marilyn
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03-24-2006, 07:32 AM
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A fantastic introduction.
Welcome, Marilyn. We look forward to getting better acquainted.
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03-24-2006, 11:27 AM
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Here's another one I love:
Rondeau: Old Woman With Cat
Osteoporosis (one of life's indignities)
is such a splendid name for the disease -
all those little o's, holes in the bone
where the rain gets in, rendering a crone
like me defective, porous as swiss cheese.
I'm riddled at the hips and knees,
roundsided as parentheses
since my shrunken spine has known
.....osteoporosis -
and my extremities
have shriveled into lacy filigrees,
breakable as glass on stone.
Naked at the window ledge I drone
to my sleek, supple Siamese:
.....osteoporosis.
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03-24-2006, 02:20 PM
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Wow. I hadn't read any of these before.
Welcome, Marilyn. Good to have you about.
Kevin
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03-24-2006, 08:44 PM
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THanks so much for posting these, Alicia and Gregory. I especially love the Blue Water Buffalo but all are lovely. We're lucky to have Marilyn here!
Christine
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03-24-2006, 09:37 PM
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Marilyn,
Welcome and best wishes.
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03-27-2006, 11:08 PM
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Welcome!
You're one of those creatures who can write sapphics.
I bow to you.
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03-28-2006, 12:19 AM
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Marilyn,
These are wonderful. Intelligent and full of feeling. What a pleasure to meet you.
Janet
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