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Unread 07-12-2010, 08:58 PM
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Nice, Frank. But aren't lines 2,4 and 6 a foot short? Lucy won't like that and it's easily put right. If you do add feet and then win I claim ten per cent! I haven't managed one this week, dammit. Yaeh, we've got the housewives, and also something called 'footballers' wives' though I confess I haven't seen either.
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