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Originally Posted by Roger Slater
You might want to lean into the Shakespeare a bit more. The poem made me think of another line in Hamlet, "I could be bound in a nutshell and count myself a king of infinite space, were it not that I have bad dreams." Maybe call the poem "Bound in a Nutshell"? I think it would make the ending seem like more than just a throwaway reference, and it would tell us what it is that the thought "slips past."
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Hi Roger,
I like your idea. I started my own list of possible titles to consider. Two of them are from Shakespeare but as segments of larger quotes do not work well like your suggestion does. I will gladly use it. If you want it back though, I will understand. Here is the list I was making. It sucked, so thanks.
Infinite Wisdom
Cogito, Ergo Sum
Never to Heaven Go
To Entertain a Thought
Search and Rescue
Fade to Black
The Itinerant
A Loose Itinerary
A Travelogue
A Question of Transience
Out of Mind
Rational Discourse
Dance of the Dendrites
Docking Station
Lightyears Away
Rescue Mission
A Matter of Gravity
But Thinking Makes It So
Off Course, Off Grid, Off Id
Before You Leap
All Thinks Big and Small
A Sucking Sound
The Void
The Vortex
Out of Orbit
Completing the Circuit
Boundaries
Pathways
Booking the Return Trip