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Unread 05-13-2014, 01:43 AM
Bruce McBirney Bruce McBirney is offline
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I think this is the personally felt gem many were waiting for.

I love the poem's "twinship"/heartbeat metaphor; the layers of meaning in the title (no, don't rename it "The Trochee"!); the well-chosen slant rhymes coalescing at the end in the perfect rhymes bound/found/sound; the whole feel and sound of it.

This strikes me as something different and lovely. Kudos to the writer!
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