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Unread 05-14-2014, 09:14 AM
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I like this one, a lot. As someone who has given birth to twins and who was completely unaware that she was carrying twins until the 20th week of the pregnancy when it was revealed at the first ultrasound, this resonates. (Somehow, my son's heartbeat was not detected in there, behind his sister, who was then and continues to be the more dominant twin!)

Though my twins, now 9, would probably not understand this, I think they would relate, in time. Very well done, on many levels.
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