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Unread 09-22-2015, 03:23 PM
Erik Olson Erik Olson is offline
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Thanks RLC.

Some spurn inaction, itch to fly;
Jumping off cliffs to live, some die.
Some stay dead stones at every age,
So never fly beyond their cage.



P.S. I'm so used to my name spelled so, I barely notice actually. Still thanks anyhow.
-Erik

Last edited by Erik Olson; 09-23-2015 at 12:21 PM. Reason: changed "stone dead" to "dead stones"; and "are" to "stay." Changed "Who" of last line to "So", as seeming less predetermined
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