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Unread 10-21-2016, 04:19 PM
Roger Slater Roger Slater is offline
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I also like the falling tone of the last line. My problem at first was that the antics of the grown-ups didn't seem repugnant enough to make a little boy not want to grow up. Only when I recalled the "I won't grow up" theme of Peter Pan did the idea gain sufficient force since it resonated with Barrie.
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