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Revisions:
S1L1 was "Does the barbed wire of anger bind your heart?"
S2L2 "Searching" was "Scanning"; line was "Searching my nets, I cannot find your heart."
S3L1 "buddy movie" was "friendship's mixtape"
S4L1 "Is" was "Was"
S5 was "Maybe you're ill. Does tangled tau obstruct / the maze I hack through to remind your heart?" then "the paths I hack through to remind your heart?"
S7L1 was "I scan the obits for your name. Has someone"
S8 was "Is my distress a taste you crave? Drink up. / Dissolve the pearl in Riesling. I've resigned your heart."
S9L1 "sign" was "get"
S9L2 was "I'll never know: have I maligned your heart?"

Last edited by Susan McLean; 08-19-2024 at 04:28 PM.
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