Matt, I'm having some trouble discerning the logic of the process that's occurred here, and what it is that has actually come back as "him", with no bones, no flesh and no skin, but what you do with it, as a poem, is great. I too like the nifty slant rhymes.
Why the three l's? Is that significant, or just a fun frill on your part?
Cheers
David
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