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Unread 01-15-2025, 06:15 PM
Bill Dyes Bill Dyes is offline
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John:

As I was reading this,
even for the first time,
the slow boil of it crested with "the sneaks"
and then it starts to re-heat again transcending it's container
with the "the lift of an ending light"
The constant weave between life and imitation of life
is very adept and knowing.
Well-crafted John.

Bill
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