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01-29-2025, 04:42 PM

Jim Ramsey Jim Ramsey is offline

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Hi Jayne,

If you decide against "incumbent," maybe "indweller" would work. It would add a bit of alliteration too with "herself." Just a thought.

Jim

ps Ahhh, but now I see it would lose some other echoes of sound...
pss I think I mean assonance

Last edited by Jim Ramsey; 01-29-2025 at 06:53 PM.

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