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02-22-2025, 08:29 PM

Jim Ramsey Jim Ramsey is offline

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Hi Glenn,

Now that I've read the revision, I'm in agreement with Matt's original take. I think the poem now just more subtly gets where it's going. I think the ending is stronger for not having the turn compete with it as much.

Jim

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