Hello, Richard — I'm glad the issues you had are mostly resolved now! And your feelings about the 'tide' line is actually similar to mine, that it could be better. So, it's just gotten a brand new tweak! And yes, 'glance' fits better. As for the 'A' for 'In' in the 'champagne' line, I've been resistant to that change until now—with em dashes, it works better. Thanks again!
Hello, Glenn — I'm glad you like the tweaks made! As for your question, though I'm no psychologist or psychiatrist, I'd say memory progressively forgets as time goes by... unless it's jolted along the way with a new trigger of recall.
Thanks again, gentlemen, for your continued attention and interest in the piece!
Cheers,
...Alex
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