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Unread 06-30-2005, 08:32 AM
Richard Wakefield Richard Wakefield is offline
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Here's a sonnet that is really stronger for being composed of couplets, although I can't say exactly why that rhyme scheme seems so powerful here.
I love the line "I hate the man you think I am." It is telling enough when we first come to it, and it takes on resonance as the poem continues.
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