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Originally posted by Martin Rocek:
Is this too end-stopped? Too clear or too unclear?
The lightning-split oak
is leafless this summer; she calls
herself widiot.
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Martin, Here is something to consider: if your poems are made up of complete grammatical units, i.e., sentences, they are much more likely to be end-stopped than if they are made up of grammatical fragments.
Lee
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