Bob, I have to disagree with Janice. It's pretty bad. Not as bad as it could be. But you're getting there. Don't give up.
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How's this?
For Love
Love's what sets your heart on fire,
It's song is like a ghostly choir.
But though Love's ways are dark and dire,
Love's all that human hearts desire.
Love cuts you like a kitchen knife,
With endless sorrow Love is rife,
But though it's full of pain and strife,
For love I'd glady give my life.
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