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Unread 08-04-2009, 02:03 PM
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I did a classic double take when I got to the end of the first line. That’s exactly what the poet and translator intended and it worked like a charm. The whole poem is delightful. The fun never lets up. I have only one wish when it comes to change: the middle lines could be polished a little more, above all to try to ease the way out of the inversion in L3.
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