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08-03-2010, 02:00 AM
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Light as air, Roger! Here's mine. A bit too stolid perhaps.
The Bonfire and the Compost Heap
I coruscate and flash.
My consequence is ash.
I brood in quietude.
I am a multitude.
Here, there and everywhere.
I dance as light as air.
I brood. I breathe a breath
Of life, and life in death.
I am the great bow-bender
Who lives and dies in splendour.
The more you fret and shout,
The sooner you go out.
My arrows light the sky.
They purge and purify.
But I remain, in rain
And sun, in sun and rain.
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08-10-2010, 05:51 PM
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I'm hot.
I burn.
I roil.
I smoulder.
My heart's ablaze.
I rot.
I turn.
I spoil.
I moulder.
My heart decays.
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08-10-2010, 10:36 PM
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Neat, Roger. This is a hard one. Only you me and Bazza, isn't it? And I'm shot. I can't do no more.
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08-11-2010, 08:15 AM
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Thanks, John. I've never won an Oldie, so anything to improve the odds.
This one is definitely hard. I'm still not convinced that a bonfire and a compost heap have enough in common to converse meaningfully, so the assignment seems a bit contrived.
I'm wondering if this slightly expanded version (adding four lines) of what I just posted might work, or if I should just stick with the shorter one:
THE BONFIRE AND THE COMPOST HEAP
I'm hot.
I burn.
I roil.
I smoulder.
My heart's ablaze.
I rot.
I turn.
I spoil.
I moulder.
My heart decays.
You're slow.
I'm fast.
You go.
I last.
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08-11-2010, 08:39 AM
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I just Googled bonfire and compost heaps and saw many pages telling us that bonfire ash makes a good addition to a compost heap, so now I wonder if this is the connection they were going for with this competition. I hope not, since it gives me no ideas.
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08-11-2010, 10:34 AM
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Most say the earth will end in fire,
some still say ice,
but the ire of many a denier
makes me think they favor fire.
Why argue, though? We won’t die twice.
Besides, with all the stuff we’ve got
I think that less might be as nice,
and hold with those who favor rot—
but not a lot.
Frank
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-- Frank
Last edited by FOsen; 08-11-2010 at 02:30 PM.
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08-11-2010, 12:26 PM
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B: Hi, Compo, how are you? I’m glad we had that storm last night;
I’m soaked right through, thank goodness. I’ll be hard to set alight.
CH: I feel much better, thank you, now I don’t smell quite so rank.
B: That’s great to hear, my friend; we both have all that rain to thank.
CH: Don’t worry, Bonny, you’ll be here for ages, I’ve a hunch;
your predecessor stood for months. 'They' are a lazy bunch!
B: I hope you’re right. They hardly ever come to see us both.
It’s been at least a fortnight since I felt the slightest growth.
CH: I don’t know why they have us – but I’m very glad we’ve met.
B: Oh, so am I! ...and may I say... you’re charming when you’re wet.
CH: How kind. The guy before you had a nasty streak, I learned,
and, honestly, I felt a bit relieved when he was burned.
B: I think we’re both quite safe for now, they won’t spread you around
this messy garden. As for me... too muddy on the ground.
CH: Yes, we’re OK; down here’s a good position to be in;
far better than poor lonely, overloaded Wheelie Bin!
Last edited by Jayne Osborn; 08-11-2010 at 05:52 PM.
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