Eratosphere Forums - Metrical Poetry, Free Verse, Fiction, Art, Critique, Discussions Able Muse - a review of poetry, prose and art

Forum Left Top

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1  
Unread 04-08-2022, 09:20 PM
Jack Land Jack Land is offline
Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2020
Location: NYC
Posts: 62
Default

deleted, November 2

Last edited by Jack Land; 11-02-2022 at 06:20 AM.
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Unread 04-09-2022, 11:06 AM
Sarah-Jane Crowson's Avatar
Sarah-Jane Crowson Sarah-Jane Crowson is offline
Moderator
 
Join Date: Oct 2018
Location: UK
Posts: 1,691
Default

I'm so glad that you wrote this. It's something that needs saying, I think, and applies (imo) equally well to the UK, which David has already mentioned.

What's so good for me is that I can share the link. As a poem that is out there, and accessible, it's a conversation to be had - and a conversation that's a great deal easier to start with 'have you seen this poem - it really made me think' than 'do you think we're racist when it comes to refugees?'

Thank you for writing socially engaged poetry.

Sarah-Jane
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Unread 04-10-2022, 08:33 AM
Jim Moonan Jim Moonan is online now
Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2016
Location: Boston, MA
Posts: 4,540
Default

.
As is often the case and the reason why I always look forward to reading your poetry and prose (comments & critiques), is that you carve a poem out of a truth that's hard to swallow. We who see beyond the cultural differences and political/economic circumstances that the lottery of life doles out, know that the truth is often shunned in favor of prejudice. [edit]

We must learn to juggle. The world feels (is it?) overwhelmed with refugees and we — the most fortunate, the ones born and raised in affluent, capitalist, materialistic-centric societies — have a tendency to be selective in our good intentions and deeds; then the trouble starts. We all must learn to see beyond our blind spots.

There was a refuge poem written by Brian Bilston that I think hits the spot, too. (As I recall it was written in response to the rise of "T" and his wrathful policies at the southern border and around the world.)

Yours, though, hits the nail on the head. Uncomfortable is a place to start.

.

Last edited by Jim Moonan; 04-10-2022 at 11:27 AM.
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Unread 04-13-2022, 09:46 AM
Mark McDonnell Mark McDonnell is offline
Member
 
Join Date: May 2016
Location: Staffordshire, England
Posts: 4,573
Default

What others have said, Julie. Well put and necessarily uncomfortable.
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Unread 04-13-2022, 09:17 PM
Martin Elster Martin Elster is offline
Member
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Connecticut, USA
Posts: 7,587
Default

I agree with all the comments, Julie. Well done!
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Unread 04-14-2022, 01:03 PM
F.F. Teague F.F. Teague is offline
Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2017
Location: Gloucestershire, UK
Posts: 1,790
Default

Congratulations, Julie; it's a great poem

Best wishes,
Fliss
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Unread 04-19-2022, 03:29 PM
Jennifer Reeser's Avatar
Jennifer Reeser Jennifer Reeser is offline
Distinguished Guest
 
Join Date: Aug 2000
Location: United States
Posts: 2,468
Default

Brava, lady. Be well.


Jenn
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



Forum Right Top
Forum Left Bottom Forum Right Bottom
 
Right Left
Member Login
Forgot password?
Forum LeftForum Right


Forum Statistics:
Forum Members: 8,505
Total Threads: 22,605
Total Posts: 278,832
There are 2941 users
currently browsing forums.
Forum LeftForum Right


Forum Sponsor:
Donate & Support Able Muse / Eratosphere
Forum LeftForum Right
Right Right
Right Bottom Left Right Bottom Right

Hosted by ApplauZ Online