[F.F. Teague]

Hi Martin and Roger,

Thanks for returning to this thread! I think I ran out of things to write about after 'Moon-Man'. I like your latest contributions. Martin, that's a great revision; Roger, very humorous with a strong ending. I got a bit of a shock! I should probably read through the poems and think about whether any of my contributions is worth revising 🤔

Best wishes,
Fliss