Hi James. The title suggests that we're into quantum physics here, but that's about as much of quantum physics as I know. And then we get God too. And the sea. (I really like the marine imagery.) Noah, even?
The last line suggests the reimagining of the Creation - "Let there be light" - in quantum terms, but that hardly seems consistent with the rest of the poem. To me, at least.
So I'm paddling frantically but staying afloat. Is there a rocket on your boat?
Cheers
David
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