Visiting the Surgical Ward

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11-29-2004, 09:00 PM

Terese Coe Terese Coe is offline

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Yes, excellent idea to reverse the final lines.

I love the colorful masquerade of the octet and then the dramatic switch to pain and misery. Swift and just the kind of poem I would want someone to write about me if I were a post-surgery patient. It could even help the patient survive.

Terese

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