[Lee Gurga]

Originally posted by Stuart Farley:
This thread has made for fascinating reading!

I'm new to haiku, and all that I know about it was learned from these very pages, not to mention Lee's articles!


Stuart

Hi, Stuart! I think you have made a good start . . .

wide-eyed lunar reveler
gazing at a puddle
a drop of rain dissolves the moon

a batch of letters
dropped amongst the leaves
- now I'll be late....

I think this one is the better of the two. It has a certain genuineness of feeling, has a distinctive gift directly from you to the reader. Lee