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Unread 10-18-2008, 09:32 PM
Chiago Mapocho Chiago Mapocho is offline
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My last batch, this. I hope you don't mind me bringing it so close to the last one. I really appreciate your expertise and thoughful points. Your energy is admirable!

harmattan haze
arranging flowers
on the windowsill

fishingboats
navigate by icebergs
find whale and song

weird yesterday
a toad backpacking sun
jump through my swing gate.

one winter
I have a cup of tea
with a tiger and an owl.

seahorses
lost in midwinter shrubs.

puddles in schoolyards
oil on blacktop
washing a blood moon

bees and sunlight
travel on a wheelbarrow
air-travel is out

(or: a wheelbarrow
with ice
remembers spring,
blackbirds and bees / blackbirds and wings / bees and sunlight / water and bees)


no birds
in a weedksy
harrowic winds plow it for clouds

forgetting me
sunlight embrace
another grave



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