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Unread 07-10-2009, 12:49 PM
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Marion,

It's overused and clichéd and so worn down that it's almost meaningless in most cases, but I have to say it here because here it's literally true:

LOL

Best laugh of the week.

Thank you!

Steve C.

p.s. Editing back. Janice, Sam, I was in such a hurry to respond to Marion that I didn't even scroll up to see the first post and so I missed yours. Much enjoyed as well. Janice, the repetition of "And if that's not enough, they know it all" at the end of S3 makes the poem. You might almost switch things around a bit so you can end on it. At any rate, saying it once is deliciously obnoxious. But it's the repeating it that's the killer.

Oh, and Marion are you deliberately throwing some Spanish in in L5? It looks like Manuel has crossed the channel from Faulty Towers for the summer or something. At any rate . . . "bloody merde"?!? Ooooouuuuch!

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Unread 07-10-2009, 12:52 PM
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Stephen,
J'adore le franglais! Couldn't resist.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Merci buckets,
Marion
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Unread 07-10-2009, 01:44 PM
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I knew you would do something unbeatable, Marion, and I would be inhibited to even dip a toe in the waters after you have done your triple backflip from the high board.

As Steve says LOL, literally, I did.
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That green mist you see following you is my envy, John.
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