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Unread 12-10-2009, 08:19 PM
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Sam's effort is unbeatable, but I will do my humble best.

Dearest John W.,
let it not trouble you
that we're confused about
whom to address
now, and in verse, in re
somebody's natal day,
and, as a consequence,
leave things a mess!

Facebook has straightened out
what we were wrong about:
Whitworth's the man to con-
gratulate here.
Let's get a start again,
taking a sharper pen:
Raise for John W.
this light-verse cheer.
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