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so much depends
upon

the bright red
logo

depicting the Coke
bottle

beneath the white
letters

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Emily Hits the Road

The heart asks reststops first,
a toilet and a smoke,
the Golden Arch that promises
a Big Mac and a Coke,

a Citco for some gas,
a Starbucks for a fix,
and for the weary motorist,
a roadside Motel Six.

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The red wheelbarrow parody is delightful.

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Thanks, Bazza.

Some good ones here. Great topic. Too bad it's not a Speccie Comp. Does Lucy take suggestions? If she used this, we'd have a headstart!
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Whose stop this is I think I know.
Their main plant is in Mexico.
They will not mind me stopping here
To fill my tank and drop some dough.

I need to pee, so how I cheer
To find a decent men's room near.
No paper towels? For heaven's sake!
These blowdriers can take all year.

I leave, and make my first mistake.
I buy a large MacDonald's shake.
It tastes like crap. At least it's cheap.
I feel my large intestines quake.

I buy a Starbucks, dark and deep,
For I have schedules left to keep,
And drivers should not fall asleep,
And drivers should not fall asleep.
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Some great stuff in this thread.
Rob, your S2 is on the nail.
Best,
David
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Marion,

Yes she does, though I've never made one.John
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