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Unread 06-21-2010, 09:00 AM
Jeff Holt Jeff Holt is offline
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Rhina, I think I speak for everyone in saying that we are just happy to have you aboard, so no need to apologize for anything! Your commentary is wonderful and much appreciated.
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Unread 06-21-2010, 10:09 AM
Rhina P. Espaillat Rhina P. Espaillat is offline
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One thing that's always struck me about poems of despair is how much more effective they are if they temper their bitterness with humor, however dark the humor. Here's one from a book titled "To Tell the Story," by a friend of mine in NYC who survived the Holocaust in a slave labor camp, and subsequently wrote poems to keep alive the memory of those who didn't make it. Her name is Yala Korwin:

Jozek's Fedora

That morning they sent us
to sort out headgear
in that hut, you know,
near the crematoria.
All sizes, shapes, colors.
Caps, hats, bonnets,
hoods, berets, biggins.

Near one edge I spotted
my brown fedora
bought in Krakow
four years before
on Grodska Street.
I stared, thinking:
is it possible?
Am I still alive?
It stared back at me
as if in disbelief
that I was still alive.

I said to Mietek:
pinch me, pinch me.
I need to know
if I am still alive.
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