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Unread 10-21-2010, 05:16 PM
Roger Slater Roger Slater is offline
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Orwn, I like it! I promise I hadn't read yours before I wrote this one, which also mentions God and Brie:


CHEESE

Although I never cared for life
and found each day depressing,
and always thought the grave would be
a mercy and a blessing
wherein I'd say good riddance to
the world, and it to me,
to my surprise, I'm dead and yet
still hankering for Brie.

Oh God, if in your mercy you
could give me one last smear of it,
I'd look upon oblivion
without the slightest fear of it.
In short, before you wipe away
the person I call Me,
can't you see your way to give
me one more taste of Brie?

Last edited by Roger Slater; 10-23-2010 at 08:43 PM.
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