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Unread 06-01-2012, 08:38 AM
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It opens with ticking and tocking;
the scene with the glass shard is shocking.
The rooms are all red,
it ends with one dead,
there's screaming and whispering and talking.

(I think like rhymes are OK in L1 and L5 of a limerick; am I wrong?)
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