[Jean L. Kreiling]

Congratulations, Maryann, on a poem both erudite and down-to-earth, both well-staged and true.

Best,
Jean

[Cally Conan-Davies]

Excellent narrative, Maryann. As Salt says, it has a lyric intensity delivered with great clarity of scene-making.

Cally

[Charlotte Innes]

Fantastic, Maryann! Funny, sad, true, relevant--and so Homeric. I kept thinking of all those long twisty stories in The Odyssey as I read, the way Odysseus keeps on lying, and somehow gets everyone to believe him, and give him food and clothes and a good bath.

Really enjoyed this one!

Charlotte

[R. Nemo Hill]

Nice, Maryann, very nice.

Nemo

[David Rosenthal]

Nice piece, Maryann, congratulations.

David R.

[Maryann Corbett]

John, Jean, Charlotte, Cally, Nemo, David--thank you all.

This seems like a good time to mention that I got the idea for the poem from a comment of Sam Gwynn's, some time ago on Facebook, about the wildly involved tales panhandlers tell, which Bill Lantry replied to by recalling the legends in which beggars turn out to be gods in disguise.

Whether it's here or there, we're always feeding each other.

[marly youmans]

Maryann, I enjoyed that one--and especially like Charlotte's comment! Given the habits of the ancient Gods and recent news about women and buses, I find the closure both tongue-in-cheek amusing and disturbing.